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New Fics!!! (Part 1)

Ok so I've been absent for a reaaaaaly long time. Life has been just beatng the tar outta me. Am still working on chapter 5 of "Lost" but I've been having a hard time...feel a little bad beating on poor Ray...he's been through enough. Have a few Walls I've done recently, they will be up soon as well :)

Anyways, I wrote these scenes for my webseries End Of Days and they involve characters named Eli and Areida, who some of you may know are "Played" byShane and Parminder, and is my "Roomies -esq" ship with a few minor differences. ANyways, I went through about three songs before I decided on what one to actually use in the episode script, but I still loved this one alot and I didn't want to just delete it so, I decided to change the names around a bit and post em as script form fics for you guys heh.

Two different "Versions" of the same sorta thing, one was a coma dream scene the other is how the episode ends back in real life...

Title: I Just Want You -Dirty Dream Version
Author: jensucks
Rating: FRT
Disclaimer: If I Owned Them, Season 13 Woulda Been Alot Different...
Spoilers: EARLY Season 13, Nothing Massive Or Anything Anyone In Here Doesn't Already Know About.
Content Warning: Slight sexual content hehe



INT. CLUB –NIGHT
The club is packed with people sitting at tables, at the bar, with barely any room to get through. Abby, Luka, Morris and Sam are front row center, Ray is on the stage with a small band as backup as he sings and plays his guitar.

RAY: (SINGING)
There Are No Incurable Ills
There Are No Unkillable Thrills
One Thing And You Know It's True
I Don't Ask Much

I Just Want You
I Just Want You
I Just Want You
I Just Want You

Neela makes her way to the table with Abby, Luka, Sam and Morris, taking a seat next to Abby who elbows her and smiles.

ABBY:
He dedicated this to you.

NEELA:
(Confused)
What?

ABBY:
(Nods)
Before the song started, he said ‘every note is for Neela’

Neela smiles and looks up at the stage.

RAY: (SINGING)
(Looking right at Neela)
I'm Sick And Tired Of Bein' Sick And Tired
I Used To Go To Bed So High And Wired
Yeah - Yeah, Yeah, Yeah
I Think I'll Buy Myself Some Plastic Water
I Guess I Should Have Married Lennon's Daughter
Yeah - Yeah, Yeah, Yeah

ABBY:
Did you tell him?

Neela looks back to Abby and nods, smiling

NEELA:
Yeah…turns out he feels the same…

RAY: (SINGING)
There Are No Unachievable Goals
There Are No Unsaveable Souls
No Legitimate Kings Or Queens,
Do You Know What I Mean? Yeah

Neela smiles wider as Ray nods and smiles at her as he continues to play.

NEELA:
Has for a while…

ABBY:
(Rolls her eyes)
Well duh.

She looks up at the stage where Ray was still looking directly at Neela, still grinning like a moron. She looks back to Neela, who is doing pretty much the same thing, and shakes her head. Morris leans over to Sam.

MORRIS:
Someone’s getting laid tonight…

RAY: (SINGING)
There Are No Undisputable Truths
And There Ain't No Fountain Of Youth
Each Night When Day Is Through
I Don't Ask Much

CUT TO-

INT. RAY’S APARTMENT –NIGHT
Ray and Neela come through the main door all over one another, barely shutting the door behind them.

RAY: (SINGING V.O)
I Just Want You
I Just Want You
I Just Want You
I Just Want You
I Just Want You
I Just Want You

CUT TO-

INT. RAY’S BEDROOM –NIGHT
The pair has pulled apart from one another now, Ray’s shirt is off, and he is slowly peeling Neela’s shirt off as well, pulling it over her head and tossing it away before leaning in to kiss her again.

RAY: (SINGING V.O)
Yeah, Yeah, Yeah
I Just Want You
I Just Want You
Hey, Yeah,


He lays her down on her back on the bed, close-up on the two of them kissing, pan down from the right side, we see her hands on his back, his hands moving down her sides slowly. Move to a bird’s-eye shot, close-up on his back we see her nails dig into his skin.

RAY: (SINGING V.O)
I Just Want You
Yeah, Yeah, Yeah
I Just Want You,
Hey

Small flash, all we see now are the blankets moving slightly, we hear a small female gasp before we fade to black.

RAY: (SINGING V.O)
I Just Want You
I Just Want You


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